As I continue to read his book, I am getting the feeling
that Harris is getting a little repetitive. Most of the concepts he explains
seem to have a lot of similarities. His Taking an Approach concept sounds very
similar to Forwarding, Coming to Terms, and Countering. In all of these we as
writers are using works that have already been writer and points that have
already been made and making them our own. Creating something original from
something original. “The original does
not go away but is remade into something new.” Taking an Approach is working in
the mode of another writer adopting their style. Taking an Approach can have
various forms depending on the choices the writer makes when they read any
given work. The New York Times most often does not take an approach because
they are reporting news and facts and these are more important to its readers
than the style of writing. But in blogs and the opinion section of the Times
taking an approach is most likely widely used. Because these types of writing
are opinion based people often attempt to create original thoughts or ideas
based on the work of another, essentially Taking an Approach. Many opinion
articles will read fact based stories and create unique opinions and
perspectives based on the unbiased sources. This is a way to Take an Approach
on something which improves the quality of the writing. In any opinion or
argument based writing, it is extremely difficult to avoid Taking an Approach
because this is essentially what one has to do in order to form a unique
opinion or argument.
Monday, February 18, 2013
Thursday, February 14, 2013
Short Essay 1
I decided to use an article from Townhall, the Fox News online site,
concerning same-sex marriage. The article was written from a very conservative
standpoint and describes how it feel that same-sex marriage will threaten the
institution of marriage and the dangers that redefining marriage will have for
us in the future. The original article argues that recognizing same0sex
marriage as legitimate will sacrifice the best interests of children. I rewrote the article for a more liberal, pro
same-sex marriage audience. I changed the language to suit this new audience
and replaced skeptical, negative opinions about same-sex marriage to opinions
reflecting a supportive view of same-sex marriage. The rewritten article
endorses an acceptance
Redefining
Marriage Raises Concerns For Children and Society
Much of the discussion around same-sex marriage involves the
impacts it may have on society. The advocates reassure us that redefining
marriage will not bring harm to anyone and this is a reassurance that we can
confidently trust.
The concept of traditional marriage as a social institution
is something that is becoming increasingly outdated. The family is the social
institution that holds true significance and it is in institution that comes in
various types and forms. Altering the definition of marriage to include all
forms of marriage will positively impact the public’s understanding of the
institution and affect society’s acceptance of the cultural norms associated
with it. The redefinition will shift the institution from a child-centric to an
adult-focused institution.
Children are still held at the utmost importance and are
loved and cared for by same-sex couples in the same way as heterosexual
couples. Same-sex couples are still able
to create a traditional family by adopting children who cannot be cared for by
the so called ‘traditional’ heterosexual couple. Solely because a marriage is
between a man and a woman does not mean that they are fit to raise a
family. The interests of children are
not being sacrificed by the new definition of marriage.
The decisions of court reflect these beliefs that children
are still being valued. The California court declared that children derive no
benefit from having both a male and female parent, and that genetic
relationship between a parent and a child is irrelevant in a child’s
upbringing. Additionally, the court puts the force of the constitution behind a
conception of marriage that (1) severs it from any inherent connection to
procreation and children, and (2) transforms marriage from a public institution
with child-focused purposes into little
more than a private self-defined relationship focused on adults. It denigrates
the importance of mothers
Officially changing the public meaning of marriage sends a
message to the public that we all need to learn to be more open to broader
definitions of marriage and that love and marriage transcends gender.
We as Americans stand on a precipice regarding marriage – an
age old and fairly outdated social institution. Just as we evolve in so many
other aspects of society – civil rights, women’s rights, etc. – we need to
evolve in our acceptance and legalization of gay rights as well. It will not
destroy the institution of marriage but instead create a countless number more
happy, loving families and create a much more accepting and tolerant nation. We
need to let go of these traditional institutions that we so desperately cling
to and change along with the times. We
should move forward with confidence that endorsing same-sex marriage will not
have any negative ramifications on us as a nation.
Tuesday, February 12, 2013
Fascination With Photographs
I found the article, “Liar, Liar, Pants on
Fire,” by Errol Morris, to be very insightful and thought provoking. He brought
up points about the nature of photography that I had not given much thought to.
Morris focuses on the contextual nature of pictures and how the meanings of
each photograph can be changed based on our knowledge of the context. The
example he provided of the Lusitania was very interesting to me especially
because in my AP American History class my teacher provided us with an
alternative context for this exact same picture. He explained that it was
suspect that Americans wanted to become involved in the war but since we always
have to play the victim we could not attack another country so we sent a boat
into a line of German fire that we were well aware was present there, thus
giving us a reason to enter into the war because we were ‘attacked.’ Now I am
not saying this theory is true but it just goes to show how many different
meanings one photograph can have depending on the context that is provided.
Another concept I liked from the article was when Morris was looking at
pictures of his own family and he inquired to himself “Who are these people? Do
they have anything to do with me? Do I really know them?” The simple fact that
we can be a completely different person than we were in an old picture is
fascinating to me. The fact that we cannot ever really remember or know what
that version of our self was thinking or feeling in that moment captured by the
camera. I have an absurd amount of pictures from high school and middle school
due to my picture-obsessed friend and going back to look at these pictures is
really entertaining and interesting to me. In so many of these pictures my
friends and I will be doing something weird and I wonder to myself ‘Honestly,
what were we thinking?’ or there are a bunch of pictures of us doing some
inside joke that I cannot even bring myself to remember anymore. Morris does a
great job of capturing the transitory and contextual nature of photographs that
fascinates me so much. One thing Morris says accurately sums up, I believe, the
main message of his article, “Pictures may be worth a thousand words, but there
are two words that you can never apply to them: “true” and “false.”’
Don't Fight About Fighting
Harris describes the idea of
countering as pointing out shortcomings and arguing with an author not just for
arguments sake but only if your purpose is to add something or give an insight
of your own. The example he opens with reminds me of times when I have actually
had fights with my siblings about whether or not we were in a fight. Its
completely useless and that is exactly what Harris is saying; you need to have a
purpose for pointing out the flaws in another’s work, other than the fact you
believe yourself to be smarter and want to prove them wrong. Instead we should
use other authors arguments not to prove them wrong but to create an
intellectual counterargument of our own. A place where countering is often
unavoidable is any context that politics is involved. For example the blog, http://hipsterlibertarian.com/
entitled the Hipster Libertarian. The tumblr page is description reads, “I like
freedom, peace, and property. I don’t like corporatism, war, and the government
telling us how to live, no matter who is in office.” There is a clearly defined
argument and opinion running through this page created by Bonnie Kristian.
Throughout the blog there are numerous online discussions and arguments in
which she engages her followers about various topics that they may agree or
disagree on. I think this countering style adds something to her pages because
she is not just stating what she believes she is interacting with people who
possess different opinions than her own and not just saying ‘anyone who
believes differently than I do is wrong.’ The term that Harris came up with for the concept is very fitting and something that all writers can benefit from using.
The Continual Nature of Writing
“Academic writing is often
described as a kind of conversation. You read a text, you talk about it, you
put down some thoughts in response, others respond to your comments, and so on.
Compares this idea to a person entering a room during a heated conversion that
cannot be stopped to explain and yet every person has walked in and has not received
any explanation of what they have missed. The individual takes part in the
discussion and when they leave the discussion still continues. To me this
reflects that writing is not being meant to have a definitive beginning or end
but to just be a continual flow of information, ideas, and discussion. Something
that anyone can pick up in the middle and add something of their own and then allow
the next person to contribute another continuous thought.“It suggests that the goal of
such writing is not to have the final word on the subject.” We do not want to
end the conversation; we want to perpetuate it. I do not think any blog or
any writing can really exist without the concept of forwarding. People have
been writing for so long that most of what people can think to originally say
has been said. Now it is just a matter of adding to the conversation, then
other people adding to what you have contributed and so on and so on.
Wednesday, February 6, 2013
The Press Sphere
In his article “The Press Becomes the
Press Sphere” Jeff Jarvis explores the concept of a ‘press sphere.’ According
to Jarvis, this press sphere is the future of news. It replaces the way we used
to get our news, “news through the filter of the press to us,” with a world of various
sources, hyperlinks, and reader interaction. This reflects the way that most
people get their news today. Nobody gets the news from just one source by
watching one television show or reading one newspaper. A variety of sources are
used such as the radio, television, newspaper, social networking – which encompasses
a wide selection of websites to choose from. But that is pretty much where he
lost me in a sea of web and technology lingo. I was a little confused by his
models and his further explanations of a press sphere. I feel like I would need
to be more knowledgeable on the subject matter to fully understand his
argument. I do understand that he is following the pattern of most of the
authors that we have read – that the internet is changing the way we interact
with the world around us. And soon the internet may be our only source for the
news.
My Experience With the Times
Reading the New York Times has
throughout this term has been a very beneficial experience. Because reading the
news is now a homework assignment it gives me the push I needed to stay updated
on what is going on in the world. I am starting to become an informed member of
society rather than someone who is completely oblivious to the world around me
and when anyone asks “have you heard about this?” the answer is always no. It is forcing me out of my uninformed bubble. The
stories that I have noticed the most are the headliners stories, the ones that
the newspaper wants the audience to see first. The stories about the various shootings and the fiscal cliff and that sort of thing. And I usually investigate
stories that interest me which leaves out a lot of sections of the Times
including sports and politics. Using the Times as opposed to the Denver Post or
my hometown newspaper the St. Louis Post Dispatch has put more of a focus on
national news rather than local news. The New York Times has not really influenced
any of my other habits but it is helping to move me in the right direction for
becoming more informed. Hopefully read
the Times can be something I can continue after the end of the course and
throughout the rest of my life.
Tuesday, February 5, 2013
Comparing News Sources
One thing I noticed while reading the posts of my classmates
is that we all have something in common: we get our news from a variety of
sources. With the advancement of social and electronic media there are so many
available news sources that most people do not use just one. The dominance of
Facebook often has a huge influence on the news people are informed about.
People use Facebook so often that whether they like it or not they read
something about a news story on Facebook before they see it on the actual news.
And the news cannot be avoided because there is a constant stream of
information on the news feed that we cannot control. The news is coming to us
rather than us seeking it out. Social networking often dominates reputable
sources as the place for my generation to get their information. Facebook and
other social networking sites as a source of media has both benefits and
drawbacks. Some benefits are the efficiency and immediacy it provides, you get
a lot of headlines quickly and get a sense of what is going on. But on the
other hand these sources definitely do not provide reputability and there is
not a lot of depth to the stories. But the stories are also much more personal
which could go both ways. Another commonality I found is that the majority of
my classmates and I are not as up to date on the news as we would like to be.
We have so many things going on in our lives and so many distractions that the
news is not often our top priority. But as we get older we come to realize that
the news are more important and hold more relevance in our lives. Another thing
I noticed is that people much prefer the more emotional and entertaining
aspects of the news rather than reading a story about the stock market or
complicated politics. I think this would not surprise Hedges and Carr at all
and attribute this concept to the rise of social media and search engines as
our outlets for information.
Monday, February 4, 2013
The News in My Life
Throughout my life I have never been
one to closely follow the news. I never watched the evening news or read the
newspaper. I would usually get tidbits of information from a variety of sources. I
would hear news from my family, classmates, teachers, and even Facebook,
unfortunately. These sources are often not reputable because I was getting my
information through word of mouth and never checked the facts directly from the
source. Throughout most of high school I wasn’t all that interested in knowing
what was going on. I was too absorbed in school and going out with friends. I
lived in my own little bubble and what went on outside of it did not really
seem to affect me so why should I care? Of course I would take a slight
interest when huge news stories came up and everyone around me was talking
about it but other than that the happenings of the world did not really concern
me. But as I creep closer and closer to being an adult and becoming part of the
‘real world’ I am trying to take more of an interest of what is happening in
the world around me because these events that couldn’t seem to penetrate my
‘high school bubble’ are much more relevant to me as a college student. This
class has facilitated this desire to be informed about the news and current
events. Using the New York Times online
for this class has been a really useful and reliable source to get my news
from. The Times is a source I can trust and one that I feel is relatively
unbiased on most of its stories. Although reading some New York Times articles
weekly is much more than I have done in the past, it is not nearly enough.
Hopefully college is a time in my life when I make keeping up with the news a
habit that I can stick with for the rest of my life.
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